This tale, tells about two people that go on a famous adventure and discovery so many new things they would of never thought. The first person they meet with is Maya the divine architect of gods. This name Maya stands for something so great and it is opposed to the feminine name Maya. It has more of a masculine meaning so it tends to have a different name. Mayasura has another story where he had befriended a snake named Takshaka and they lived in a area where they had friends and family. But when Pandavas came they burnt the entire forest down which caused the snake to run away and everything was dead in the forest. Krishna and Pandavas were some troublemakers, looking for some trouble to get into. So one night they seen this picnic going on and wanted to join, walking into that party they seen so many women that they fell inlove. In the party there were two mother boys named Draupadi and Subhadra that gave in to the females in that party simply because they was intoxicated. Later on, Krishna and Arjuna were telling stories when two men in ragged up clothes and the two of them thought these men were hero. Angi was a unique individual and did not just eat any kind of food, he was the god of fire so he could not just eat anything. After, eating so much Ghee it had made him sick where he was weak and pale. After, see Angi this way Krishna and Arjuna said they were going to help him if he was able to get them some weapons to carry on them. He provided them with some many weapons that they were ready for anything that would come their way. A great battle was sure to come and they were going to be ready for anything.
bibliography: The Burning of The Forest
Hey Brisby!
ReplyDeleteThis was a great take on The Burning of the Forest. You really capture a "party boy" attitude in the Pandava brothers. I also really liked the images you used for this story. They set up an ominous feeling right from the beginning. It seems like you are setting it up for another story, I hope I get the chance to read it!
Hi again, Brisby!
ReplyDeleteI liked your story, it was short and sweet, and got right to the point. There were a few typos here and there, like using was instead of were when speaking of Draupadi and Subhadra being intoxicated. Other than that, the story was great! Like Jessica said above, you really sold the whole bad, "party boy" attitude that the Pandavas have.
Hi, Brisby!
ReplyDeleteYour story was great and I really enjoyed reading it! The pictures you used were perfect and helping tell the story so much. One suggestion I have is to maybe break up the story into smaller paragraphs, just so it is easier for the reader to follow along and not get lost in the story. Overall though this is great and I really liked it!